A Message

Like the others have said the message inside the bottle gives a great meaning to the viewer which can portray a strong and moving message. I like how the paper looks kind of "fuzzy" in a way....gives a great variety in textures to help exaggerate the flat and clear look of glass. I also like the thickness of the words and how clear they look...but the word "keeps" is a little unfocused for my taste....I think if a little more of the other words where kind of blurred out then it would be more appealling..if not i wish that all the words where clear.....And i do like the color choices for the background...and the fact that part of the bottle is running off the side of the page is a nice affect...but to be honest...I think using more of the negative space or placing the object on a surface...to show the term "deep space"- like "foreground".."middle ground".."background" and stuff...lol would be more affective...i hope that makes sense and helps in anyway...lol...i love commenting on your stuff...so keep it up your doing great! lol